PSY 3630 Module 6 Performance Appraisal Paper: Feedback That Helps and Feedback That Harms Example

Reviewed by Dorcas Lindqvist, MA Thomas Edison State University Updated October 2026

Performance appraisal and feedback are the subject of this PSY 3630 Module 6 sample paper, following a fictional coastal credit union as it trades an annual rating form for member service representatives with ongoing performance management. Created for TESU's industrial psychology course, taken by many Human Resources students, the paper uses Kluger and DeNisi's meta-analysis, where feedback raised performance on average yet lowered it in over a third of comparisons, DeNisi and Murphy's review of 100 years of appraisal research and Smither, London and Reilly's meta-analysis of multisource feedback. A redesigned system tied to the job analysis closes this PSY-3630 paper.

CoursePSY-3630 Industrial Psychology
ModuleModule 6
Paper typeApplied paper: performance appraisal and feedback
LengthAbout 1,001 words, 6 pages
FormatAPA 7 student paper
SchoolThomas Edison State University
ProgramB.S.B.A. in Human Resources/Organizational Management
UpdatedOctober 2026

Free sample paper for PSY 3630 Module 6

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One in Three Makes It Worse: Redesigning Feedback for Member Service Representatives

Student Name

B.S.B.A. in Human Resources/Organizational Management, Thomas Edison State University

PSY-3630: Industrial Psychology

Mentor Name

Month Day, Year

What this page is doingThe title reports the most surprising finding in feedback research, that more than a third of feedback interventions reduced performance rather than improving it.
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One in Three Makes It Worse: Redesigning Feedback for Member Service Representatives

Introduction

Each December, branch managers at the credit union rate every member service representative from 1 to 5 on eight general traits, such as initiative and attitude, and hold a short meeting to discuss the form. Raises depend on the rating. Representatives describe the meetings as tense and the ratings as arbitrary, and managers rate nearly everyone a 4. The human resources director asked for a redesign grounded in research.

What Feedback Does

Kluger and DeNisi (1996) pooled several hundred effect sizes on feedback interventions. The average result was a moderate gain in performance, with an effect size of about .41. Yet over one third of the comparisons showed feedback pulling performance down. Their feedback intervention theory explained why: feedback aimed at the task and at concrete ways to improve it usually helps, while feedback that turns attention to the self, for instance personal praise, criticism of the person or ranking against others, tends to hurt, because it shifts attention away from the task to protecting self-image. Feedback that is specific, related to clear goals and focused on changes the person can make works best.

A Century of Appraisal Research

DeNisi and Murphy (2017) looked back over a century of appraisal studies in the field's flagship applied journal. The earliest work focused on rating scale formats and rater errors, such as leniency and halo, in the hope that a better form would produce accurate ratings. Later research recognized that ratings are shaped by the social context, including managers' goals, relationships and the consequences of ratings, such as pay. More recently, attention has shifted from appraisal, the once-a-year rating, to performance management, the ongoing process of setting goals, giving feedback and developing employees. They noted that despite a century of research, there is still limited evidence that appraisal itself improves performance, and they called for research that tests this directly.

Multisource Feedback

Smither et al. (2005) meta-analyzed studies of multisource or 360-degree feedback, in which employees receive ratings from supervisors, peers, subordinates and sometimes customers. Performance improved after multisource feedback, but the average improvement was small. Improvement was larger for people who received unfavorable feedback and believed change was necessary, who had a positive orientation toward feedback, who set goals and who took action, such as discussing feedback with others or attending development activities.

SourceKey findingDesign choice
Kluger and DeNisi (1996)Over a third of feedback lowered performance; task focus helpsFeedback on specific tasks, not traits or comparisons
DeNisi and Murphy (2017)Context shapes ratings; shift to ongoing managementFrequent check-ins; separate development from pay
Smither et al. (2005)Multisource feedback helps modestly when followed by goals and actionMember feedback plus a goal plan
What this page is doingThe table carries each finding into a design decision. Mentors credit papers that apply research to a real system.
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Problems With the Current System

The current form rates general traits, which, by Kluger and DeNisi's theory, pulls attention toward self-image and away from the work. Ratings tied to raises invite leniency, which DeNisi and Murphy's context view explains: managers avoid conflict and protect their teams. One annual meeting gives too little feedback, too late, to guide improvement.

The Redesigned System

Four linked parts replace the annual form. First, the rating dimensions come from the job analysis clusters: problem resolution, account and loan accuracy, digital support, cash handling and referral. Each has behavioral anchors written with experienced representatives, like those in the interview. Second, managers hold 15-minute check-ins every month, focused on one or two specific tasks, using data such as paperwork audits and member comments, and ending with one goal for the next month. Third, member feedback from short surveys after transactions provides a customer source, and peer input on teamwork is collected twice a year, with results discussed in a development meeting that sets goals, following Smither and colleagues. Fourth, the annual pay decision is separated from development conversations, held in a different meeting and based on documented results across the year.

What this page is doingSeparating pay from development addresses the context problem DeNisi and Murphy describe. Graders look for this.
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Rater Errors

Even with a better form, ratings can be distorted. Leniency, giving everyone high ratings, is the credit union's main problem. Halo, letting one impression color all dimensions, and recency, weighting the last few weeks most, are also common. Monthly check-ins with notes reduce recency, behavioral anchors reduce halo and separating pay decisions from development reduces the pressure behind leniency.

Handling Poor Performance

Ongoing feedback also changes how poor performance is handled. Instead of discovering a problem at year end, managers raise it in a monthly check-in with specific examples, set a clear goal and offer support, such as a refresher with a peer coach. If performance does not improve after three months, a documented improvement plan follows, which is fairer to the employee and more defensible for the credit union.

Training Managers

Managers will be trained to give task-focused feedback, avoiding statements about personality or comparisons with coworkers, and to ask representatives to describe their own view first. A short guide will include examples of helpful and unhelpful feedback.

Evaluation

The credit union will track rating distributions to check that leniency has decreased, survey representatives on the usefulness of feedback, compare paperwork error rates and member satisfaction before and after and monitor whether turnover among strong performers falls.

Rollout

The new system will start with a pilot in three branches whose managers volunteered, with a review after six months. Lessons from the pilot, including how long check-ins actually take, will shape the version rolled out to all branches.

Limits

Evidence that appraisal improves performance remains limited, as DeNisi and Murphy note. Multisource feedback effects were small. The credit union is invented.

Conclusion

Kluger and DeNisi showed that feedback can harm when it targets the person rather than the task, DeNisi and Murphy showed that appraisal is shaped by its social context and has moved toward ongoing management and Smither and colleagues showed that multisource feedback helps when followed by goals and action. For member service representatives, monthly task-focused check-ins, job-based anchored dimensions, member feedback with goals and a separate pay process put this research to work.

References

DeNisi, A. S., & Murphy, K. R. (2017). Performance appraisal and performance management: 100 years of progress? Journal of Applied Psychology, 102(3), 421-433. https://doi.org/10.1037/apl0000085

Kluger, A. N., & DeNisi, A. (1996). The effects of feedback interventions on performance: A historical review, a meta-analysis, and a preliminary feedback intervention theory. Psychological Bulletin, 119(2), 254-284. https://doi.org/10.1037/0033-2909.119.2.254

Smither, J. W., London, M., & Reilly, R. R. (2005). Does performance improve following multisource feedback? A theoretical model, meta-analysis, and review of empirical findings. Personnel Psychology, 58(1), 33-66. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1744-6570.2005.514_1.x

Reading the PSY 3630 Module 6 assignment instructions

Development in TESU's PSY-3630 catalog paragraph includes how employees are evaluated and given feedback, and since the syllabus is shared only inside the course, module six is planned as a performance appraisal paper. A paper like this diagnoses problems in an existing system, reports research on feedback and appraisal accurately, designs dimensions from job analysis, plans the frequency and focus of feedback, considers multisource input, separates development from pay where appropriate and sets out evaluation. In some sections the task is instead to critique an appraisal form already in use. Ask whether your mentor wants a sample form in an appendix. Address rater errors and how poor performance will be handled, since mentors look for both. Include a pilot or rollout plan so the redesign can be tested.

How the PSY 3630 Module 6 example is put together

Managers at an invented credit union rate representatives once a year on eight general traits, and nearly everyone gets a 4. Kluger and DeNisi's feedback meta-analysis and theory, DeNisi and Murphy's 100-year review and Smither and colleagues' multisource feedback meta-analysis follow, with a table turning each into a design choice. Problems with the current system, a four-part redesign with job-based anchors, monthly check-ins, member and peer feedback and a separate pay process, manager training, evaluation, limits and a conclusion complete the paper; leniency, halo, recency and early handling of weak performance are treated just before manager training. A pilot in three volunteer branches comes before full rollout.

Where the marks sit in the PSY 3630 Module 6 rubric

Appraisal papers earn credit for diagnosing an existing system with research, accurate reporting of feedback effects including harm, an understanding of the social context of ratings, dimensions drawn from job analysis with anchors, frequent task-focused feedback, multisource input followed by goals, separation of development from pay and an evaluation plan. Explaining why trait ratings can backfire stands out. Training managers in task-focused feedback shows practical application of theory. Naming specific rater errors and the design features that reduce each shows command of appraisal research. Handling poor performance early shows fairness and practicality. Piloting with volunteer managers shows awareness of change management.

Common PSY 3630 Module 6 mistakes, and how to avoid them

Appraisal papers often redesign the form and stop; change how and how often feedback is given. Another common gap is ignoring that feedback can harm. Rate tasks, not traits. Give feedback monthly. Tie it to goals. Use member and peer input. Separate pay from development. Train managers. Measure whether it works. For a free first draft about your own organization, send the prompt. Name the rater errors you expect. Show how your design reduces each. Plan for poor performance early, not at year end. Pilot the new system first. Learn how long check-ins really take. Show managers how to open a check-in with the employee's own view.

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PSY 3630 Module 6 questions, answered

Where can I find a free PSY 3630 Module 6 sample paper?

The performance appraisal paper for an invented credit union, from feedback research to a redesigned system, is available here.

Does feedback always improve performance?

No; in Kluger and DeNisi's data, more than one intervention in three left performance worse, most often when the message turned to the person.

What kind of feedback works best?

Specific feedback about the task and how to improve it, linked to clear goals.

Does 360-degree feedback improve performance?

Modestly; Smither and colleagues found larger gains when people set goals and acted on the feedback.

Why separate pay decisions from development feedback?

Linking ratings to pay encourages leniency and defensiveness, which undermine honest development conversations.